http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 04:50:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-6262 7ur713 Wed, 07 Oct 2009 20:14:25 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-6262 too short and not enough action I give it a 6/10 too short and not enough action
I give it a 6/10

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-33 Joe from Philly Thu, 19 Jun 2008 13:19:36 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-33 I really liked your story. Great descriptions and nice way to twist it at the end. All in all I thought it was excellent. I really liked your story. Great descriptions and nice way to twist it at the end. All in all I thought it was excellent.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-32 Tom Hamilton Sun, 12 Aug 2007 02:08:41 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/07/13/the-theory-of-existence-by-amanda-lawrence-auverigne/#comment-32 Obviously, Amanda is trying to surprise the reader with the zombies rampaging through the streets at the end. This might work a little better if the story wasn't being posted on a zombie website. In other words, we know the zombies must be coming at some point as opposed to just thinking that it's two young lovers ( Revealed later as brother and sister in a realistic twist.) gazing up at the stars. It's a solid story that generates a lot of thought in a minimum word count, although I think that the couple perhaps says: "There has to be more than this." Or similar sentiments maybe one too many times. I still would have preferred it if I hadn't known the zombies were coming at the end. But that's not Amanda's fault. It's a good story. Obviously, Amanda is trying to surprise the reader with the zombies rampaging through the streets at the end. This might work a little better if the story wasn’t being posted on a zombie website. In other words, we know the zombies must be coming at some point as opposed to just thinking that it’s two young lovers ( Revealed later as brother and sister in a realistic twist.) gazing up at the stars.
It’s a solid story that generates a lot of thought in a minimum word count, although I think that the couple perhaps says: “There has to be more than this.” Or similar sentiments maybe one too many times. I still would have preferred it if I hadn’t known the zombies were coming at the end. But that’s not Amanda’s fault. It’s a good story.

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