Comments on: DEAD MAN’S PARTY by Kevin James Breaux

By: Clement S.

Clement S. — Sat, 14 Aug 2010 06:37:14 +0000

*chuckle* “Strep Z”. Loved that. Your story held me in suspense to the last bloody drop. One thing tho, streptococcus is a bacterium not a virus

By: Kevin James Breaux

Kevin James Breaux — Sat, 14 Aug 2010 01:47:37 +0000

Thanks so much for all the kind words and support. I am always excited to read what people think of my hard work. I have been really busy developing and writing a bunch of short stories and two novels. If you check out my site http://www.kevinbreaux.com you review more of my work. Thanks!!!!

By: will

will — Tue, 10 Aug 2010 03:13:27 +0000

Great story, especially the character development. By the end I was ready to jump with Ashley!

By: Hightower

Hightower — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 21:29:17 +0000

Great misdirection. I was totally sold on the drug,hallucination premise till the doc with the armed guards. M. Night Shamylan(?) should take notes…

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 02:10:18 +0000

Excellent twist within a twist! For a moment, I thought this was like that unfortunate story of the guy who mistakenly killed people in costume for a zombie walk. Poor Ashley…she always dreamt of Sarah eating her, but not like that!

By: Brandon

Brandon — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 22:12:29 +0000

cover ups are a real beach arent they? =)

By: Arna

Arna — Sun, 06 Apr 2008 08:33:10 +0000

Loved it, specially the ending. Keep ‘em coming.

By: Ben

Ben — Mon, 04 Feb 2008 10:17:56 +0000

Powerfully written and gripping, I loved the ending:) Good job

By: Max Smith

Max Smith — Thu, 20 Dec 2007 22:06:11 +0000

Great development–great images…I love it–want to see more…