Comments on: CLEANUP CREW by Patrick M. Tracy

By: Chris

Chris — Thu, 08 Oct 2009 14:16:38 +0000

Reminds me of S.M. Sterling a little with the “Change”. Like the idea

By: Terry Schultz

Terry Schultz — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 05:34:27 +0000

The smartass comment I think is what hooked me into this one. “Vincent wins, world loses. More at eleven.” Brings the whole situation down to earth and a little bit of humor goes a long way.

I’ll keep checking for more of your stories on here. Can’t wait for the next.

By: Patrick M. Tracy

Patrick M. Tracy — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 02:15:14 +0000

Thanks, everyone. I appreciate that you took time to read my little story and comment. Mercurial Georgia, I do intend to continue the “flashover” story line. I have two more stories in the works at this point, and I’ll submit them when they’re ready.

Again, thanks.

By: Mercurial Georgia

Mercurial Georgia — Sun, 20 Jan 2008 02:02:28 +0000

Is there going to be more, this and the Big Dave piece, could stand on their own, but reads like interesting chapters now, with the beginning and more to come endings.

By: Max Smith

Max Smith — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 19:44:24 +0000

Interesting take…good story

By: drthunder

drthunder — Thu, 18 Oct 2007 22:52:02 +0000

A good story. Well written and well thought out. Definitely leaves the reader wanting more. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

By: Bobby-T

Bobby-T — Thu, 18 Oct 2007 19:09:01 +0000

A chilling start to a compelling story line. “…there’s this light in the sky, and then silence.” That’s a pretty good hook right there. “We’re all janitors now…” The concept of some becoming Zombies, some being vaporized, and a few others apparently unaffected is pretty interesting. I’d like to see how this tale unfolds.

By: Paul Genesse

Paul Genesse — Thu, 18 Oct 2007 17:19:49 +0000

Cool story with a new spin on the zombie apocalypse idea. I liked the ending. Keep up the good work.

Paul