Comments on: THEY’LL EAT IT UP! by James Goad

By: mike

mike — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 20:56:02 +0000

I didn’t like it one bit, I think you can write better than that.

By: Terry Schultz

Terry Schultz — Tue, 01 Sep 2009 23:05:29 +0000

I liked it from the standpoint that when you don’t know what the problem is you start grasping at straws. Would like to see this longer though, started developing nicely then kind of leaves you hanging at the end.

By: Andre

Andre — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 06:16:54 +0000

I’m a screenwriter too and this one was just too far out for me. It didn’t quite hit the nail on the had but I think I see where you were going with it. Keep working on it. There might be something there in terms of a feature that could tell a story form both the perspectives of the living and the dead.