Comments on: THE MARIONETTE by Jeffrey DeRego

By: dave

dave — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 14:18:23 +0000

great story, like the other Hollow stories you get sucked into the peoples lives, but then get blasted back with the constant fear they face everyday.

By: kineo

kineo — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:26:37 +0000

Excellent story, really enjoyed it. Keep writing!

By: fred

fred — Sun, 27 Sep 2009 11:17:04 +0000

I love the creepy sense of death that’s just everywhere.All of these stories are really cool.I like the characters in this town.They’ve just went with it as best they can.

By: Andrew

Andrew — Sun, 19 Apr 2009 00:27:19 +0000

I’m really enjoying this Pleasant Hollow series you have going. It really shows whats going on with small community’s and the different people that live in them.

By: Andre

Andre — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 03:02:21 +0000

Really depressing. I’m getting tired of all the stories that have people clawing, fighting, surviving and all that just to go kill themselves or each other. You are a good writer but man, what a bummer.

By: Zorag

Zorag — Tue, 09 Dec 2008 01:57:12 +0000

I think you did a masterful job of illustrating the hardships that zombies would bring. I love the reaction when he hears that they burned the books.

By: Susannah

Susannah — Sat, 08 Nov 2008 14:09:26 +0000

I’d love to hear more stories from the town these characters you write about come from!

I really enjoy your work and I hope I will be able to write as well as you someday :] .

By: James F. Reilly

James F. Reilly — Sat, 01 Mar 2008 20:00:47 +0000

Jeff, you’re a sick bastard. LOL.

Good work!

Jim

By: Don

Don — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 04:37:32 +0000

It seems to me that Marta was irrational, petulant, and useless – a liability through and through. By locking him in the cellar and leaving, she could have gotten him killed. He never should have went looking for her.

By: Lawliet

Lawliet — Sat, 23 Feb 2008 03:13:48 +0000

this is a very interesting and sad story i realy enjoyed it