Comments on: SICK DAY by Dan DeWitt http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Thu, 29 Jul 2010 21:18:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Dan DeWitt http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-7163 Dan DeWitt Tue, 08 Dec 2009 16:10:14 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7163 *whew* I'm glad I checked back here today! Once again, thanks for all the complimentary feedback. I'm now convinced that this story (and you readers) deserve a follow-up. I don't think it needs to be a Kate's POV vs. a true sequel decision, either. I think I can do both. I bet I can submit it by the end of the weekend, so stick around. Lastly, and this may or may not be of any interest to you, but I've been working on a zombie (naturally) novel for the last few months. If you have any interest in getting a rough copy when it's done and giving me your critique, just let me know! dan *whew* I’m glad I checked back here today!

Once again, thanks for all the complimentary feedback. I’m now convinced that this story (and you readers) deserve a follow-up. I don’t think it needs to be a Kate’s POV vs. a true sequel decision, either. I think I can do both. I bet I can submit it by the end of the weekend, so stick around.

Lastly, and this may or may not be of any interest to you, but I’ve been working on a zombie (naturally) novel for the last few months. If you have any interest in getting a rough copy when it’s done and giving me your critique, just let me know!

dan

]]> By: Cherry Darling http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-7161 Cherry Darling Tue, 08 Dec 2009 00:20:29 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7161 Great story. Lead them to victory! Great story. Lead them to victory!

]]> By: liz http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-7122 liz Fri, 04 Dec 2009 06:10:02 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7122 Don't you dare kill them off! Don’t you dare kill them off!

]]> By: Tanya Vela http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-7117 Tanya Vela Thu, 03 Dec 2009 22:53:50 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7117 I loved it! Especially when the survivors actually survive! I loved it! Especially when the survivors actually survive!

]]> By: Kevin http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-6599 Kevin Sun, 01 Nov 2009 23:49:49 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-6599 Dan, I truly enjoyed your story. That being said, I have a minor complaint. The opening paragraph leads you to believe that the story is going to have a dark and despairing ending. I loved the build-up, and couldn't wait to see what would happen next. Then the story just ends. I would love to see an alternative ending to this story inserted right after the pied-piper line.(I loved this line) All in all it was a good read. Thanks. Dan, I truly enjoyed your story. That being said, I have a minor complaint. The opening paragraph leads you to believe that the story is going to have a dark and despairing ending. I loved the build-up, and couldn’t wait to see what would happen next. Then the story just ends. I would love to see an alternative ending to this story inserted right after the pied-piper line.(I loved this line) All in all it was a good read. Thanks.

]]> By: Walter http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-1143 Walter Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:03:06 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-1143 GREAT job, I really enjoyed this one. It has a positive note to that says they will survivie. Keep it going, I look forward to reading more. GREAT job, I really enjoyed this one. It has a positive note to that says they will survivie. Keep it going, I look forward to reading more.

]]> By: Andre http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-368 Andre Mon, 29 Dec 2008 04:13:09 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-368 Great work on this. You need to write more and definitely more on this family. The wife's perspective wold be great but I want a sequel! This is also very cinematic. It would make a great opening sequence to a film. Great work on this. You need to write more and definitely more on this family. The wife’s perspective wold be great but I want a sequel! This is also very cinematic. It would make a great opening sequence to a film.

]]> By: Zoe http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-367 Zoe Mon, 14 Jul 2008 16:09:30 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-367 I liked this one. Please don't kill them off. There have to be some that lived. I liked this one. Please don’t kill them off.
There have to be some that lived.

]]> By: Brandon Layng http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/comment-page-1/#comment-366 Brandon Layng Fri, 09 May 2008 08:44:51 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-366 I really liked the slightly panicked conversational tone of this piece. It made it easy to get into and made the reader feel some serious tension at times. Great job Dan. I must admit a bit of disappointment that no one important died. But I'll get over that. I really liked the slightly panicked conversational tone of this piece. It made it easy to get into and made the reader feel some serious tension at times. Great job Dan. I must admit a bit of disappointment that no one important died. But I’ll get over that.

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