Comments on: SICK DAY by Dan DeWitt http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 04:50:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: hope1719 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-10031 hope1719 Sat, 07 May 2011 07:28:56 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-10031 Aweessoommee story! Got the blood pumping alright :D Aweessoommee story! Got the blood pumping alright :D

]]> By: Shawn http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-8996 Shawn Sun, 24 Oct 2010 05:29:24 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-8996 Glad to hear ur doing a sequel, Really enjoyed this story, despite it being short. I'm with the crowd that wants them to live, for what that's worth. Been too much "the zombies ate them all, the end" movies and books lately. Glad to hear ur doing a sequel,
Really enjoyed this story, despite it being short. I’m with the crowd that wants them to live, for what that’s worth. Been too much “the zombies ate them all, the end” movies and books lately.

]]> By: Dan DeWitt http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7163 Dan DeWitt Tue, 08 Dec 2009 16:10:14 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7163 *whew* I'm glad I checked back here today! Once again, thanks for all the complimentary feedback. I'm now convinced that this story (and you readers) deserve a follow-up. I don't think it needs to be a Kate's POV vs. a true sequel decision, either. I think I can do both. I bet I can submit it by the end of the weekend, so stick around. Lastly, and this may or may not be of any interest to you, but I've been working on a zombie (naturally) novel for the last few months. If you have any interest in getting a rough copy when it's done and giving me your critique, just let me know! dan *whew* I’m glad I checked back here today!

Once again, thanks for all the complimentary feedback. I’m now convinced that this story (and you readers) deserve a follow-up. I don’t think it needs to be a Kate’s POV vs. a true sequel decision, either. I think I can do both. I bet I can submit it by the end of the weekend, so stick around.

Lastly, and this may or may not be of any interest to you, but I’ve been working on a zombie (naturally) novel for the last few months. If you have any interest in getting a rough copy when it’s done and giving me your critique, just let me know!

dan

]]> By: Cherry Darling http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7161 Cherry Darling Tue, 08 Dec 2009 00:20:29 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7161 Great story. Lead them to victory! Great story. Lead them to victory!

]]> By: liz http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7122 liz Fri, 04 Dec 2009 06:10:02 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7122 Don't you dare kill them off! Don’t you dare kill them off!

]]> By: Tanya Vela http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7117 Tanya Vela Thu, 03 Dec 2009 22:53:50 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-7117 I loved it! Especially when the survivors actually survive! I loved it! Especially when the survivors actually survive!

]]> By: Kevin http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-6599 Kevin Sun, 01 Nov 2009 23:49:49 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-6599 Dan, I truly enjoyed your story. That being said, I have a minor complaint. The opening paragraph leads you to believe that the story is going to have a dark and despairing ending. I loved the build-up, and couldn't wait to see what would happen next. Then the story just ends. I would love to see an alternative ending to this story inserted right after the pied-piper line.(I loved this line) All in all it was a good read. Thanks. Dan, I truly enjoyed your story. That being said, I have a minor complaint. The opening paragraph leads you to believe that the story is going to have a dark and despairing ending. I loved the build-up, and couldn’t wait to see what would happen next. Then the story just ends. I would love to see an alternative ending to this story inserted right after the pied-piper line.(I loved this line) All in all it was a good read. Thanks.

]]> By: Walter http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-1143 Walter Wed, 01 Apr 2009 13:03:06 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-1143 GREAT job, I really enjoyed this one. It has a positive note to that says they will survivie. Keep it going, I look forward to reading more. GREAT job, I really enjoyed this one. It has a positive note to that says they will survivie. Keep it going, I look forward to reading more.

]]> By: Andre http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-368 Andre Mon, 29 Dec 2008 04:13:09 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2008/04/01/sick-day-by-dan-dewitt/#comment-368 Great work on this. You need to write more and definitely more on this family. The wife's perspective wold be great but I want a sequel! This is also very cinematic. It would make a great opening sequence to a film. Great work on this. You need to write more and definitely more on this family. The wife’s perspective wold be great but I want a sequel! This is also very cinematic. It would make a great opening sequence to a film.

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