Comments on: ZOMBIE TEARS by Ty Johnston

By: liz

liz — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 05:46:35 +0000

This is an excellent look on what it would be like if you still had some type of mind left but it was fading and you knew WHAT you were turning in to! Very well written and sadly scary story.

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 03:11:23 +0000

Interesting concept. Personally, I fear dying because I imagine that we are actually conscious. I think people in comas are still aware but can’t react and I think death is a deeper coma. I think we can feel our bodies decaying, so it makes sense that being a zombie you still have an awareness but unable to control those animalistic urges.

By: Andre

Andre — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 01:49:56 +0000

Well written but too far off the mark for me. I like the Zombie War deads, the G.A. Romero types. These talking zoms just remind me of murderous criminals rather than “motorized instinct”. You are a good compelling writer however so keep down your own path and cannon. That’s the beauty of this site, one s free to create his own world of zombiedome since they don’t exeist… yet…

By: Greg

Greg — Tue, 21 Oct 2008 03:59:59 +0000

Jesus that is a terrifying concept, “THE REALY LIVING DEAD’.

By: Brandon Layng

Brandon Layng — Fri, 09 May 2008 08:23:09 +0000

Well done. The Zombie narration was a little unusual, but the method by which you used it was intriguing. Once again well done.

By: Adam Smith

Adam Smith — Mon, 28 Apr 2008 01:25:54 +0000

I got that Jesus feeling just reading this. You’ve created a pretty cool new type of zombie. I like the way his mind and speech patterns deteriorated, illustrating the way his body must have been. Very cool. Adam

By: Travis

Travis — Sat, 19 Apr 2008 03:17:09 +0000

Very nice. Had me reading straight thru, no stops. I like the idea of some dead retaining intelligence. It makes it that much harder to objectify them.

By: Greg

Greg — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 14:00:15 +0000

Man this zombie is FRESH (still kickin), I love the first person perspective, now I have some more BRAIN FODDER.
Thank you.

By: Arna

Arna — Fri, 18 Apr 2008 09:47:06 +0000

Excellent, i loved it!

By: Vincent

Vincent — Wed, 16 Apr 2008 22:37:27 +0000

I enjoyed this story very much, gave me some insight to the zombie way of life. Amazing job.