Comments on: ZOMBIE TOWN by Adam Francis Smith

By: Connor Madz

Connor Madz — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 22:48:06 +0000

Great job Adam. I saw a few zombies across the street in the woods but that was nothing a good old crowbar cant fix. Also i want to see the zombies actually become smart and get a zombie to be leader. Then it would be a whole new war

By: Nickolsus Pacione

Nickolsus Pacione — Mon, 02 Aug 2010 06:40:47 +0000

Hey Adam, I have to say I am impressed wiith this one I think yiou took the zombie story and gave it a new archtype.

By: Thief Evony

Thief Evony — Fri, 16 Jul 2010 19:37:41 +0000

Good read , Nice clear image of the characters and if you made a book it would surely be a page turner !

By: Adam Smith

Adam Smith — Fri, 26 Dec 2008 16:13:38 +0000

Evan, it means “I love you, too.” Thanks for coming by to read this one. I’m glad you like Skiff. He will be in another story with Morgan soon, so keep in touch!

By: Evan M

Evan M — Fri, 12 Dec 2008 01:39:05 +0000

Hey Uncle Aber, nice story dude, I really like Skiff, he’s a effing beast. You have to tell me though, in the story this has been driving me crazy! What does it mean when Violet gives Skiff four squezzes instead of three. What does it mean!!!

By: Adam Smith

Adam Smith — Tue, 09 Dec 2008 18:12:13 +0000

Jake, thanks for the comments. I’m glad you found it to be a good read. I’m sure the zombies will figure out how to get the food… that’s what they are best at anyway Adam

By: jake

jake — Tue, 02 Dec 2008 07:38:39 +0000

good read. i feel srry for all those zombies. skiff said they had alot of food, but the food was sealed in the basment. they must kill to get in to have a good meal. hehehe

By: David

David — Sun, 16 Nov 2008 12:47:53 +0000

Adam, not a bad read. I can see some sick twist doing something like this. I live only a few miles from you, down near Princeton. Seems like there’s a lot of us Midwesterners on this site. Interesting. Anyway, good story. The logic held together well. It flowed well from point to point. Some on this site don’t do that well, or at all for that matter. One thing though in your writing, when you have dialog, don’t be afraid to have people use contraction. Listen to how people talk. Two or three folks having a conversation will speak differantly. You job as a writer is to make us hear those differances. Just listen to someone from downstate vs a born and raised Chicagoan. ‘Specially when dey talk ’bout dem Bears anna Bulls. ha!

By: admin

admin — Thu, 23 Oct 2008 16:09:09 +0000

Mr. Smith – please contact us with your new email address.