Comments on: COOL CREEK WATERS by Kevin White

By: jeff

jeff — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 18:58:32 +0000

i was hoping the kid got killed for being stupid. his parents should be killed too for not warning their kids about a zombie outbreak. i really liked the story though, good work.

By: Andre

Andre — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 05:06:59 +0000

Well done. Plays right out of the nightmares of a child.

By: Kevin White

Kevin White — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 17:31:54 +0000

Thanks everyone for the comments and feedback. I’ll see if I can “scare” something up to submit soon.

By: Zoe

Zoe — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 14:51:10 +0000

That was scary! Good job.

By: Lan

Lan — Thu, 05 Jun 2008 21:35:58 +0000

Classic suspense! Beauty.

By: Patrick M. Tracy

Patrick M. Tracy — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 02:52:59 +0000

Interesting! Zombie as ambush predator. Good detail and atmosphere, good portrayal of a young protagonist.

By: Sin "08"

Sin "08" — Sat, 31 May 2008 06:25:04 +0000

Very nice story i loved how you went into detail about everything. Left me wanting more at the end though but great job either way.

By: Flytch

Flytch — Fri, 30 May 2008 18:58:41 +0000

Brilliant, I love the atmosphere, the description and the subtle references to a zombie outbreak without directly referencing it.