Comments on: UNTITLED PART 4 by Clitoris Rex

By: Clitoris Rex

Clitoris Rex — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 20:49:05 +0000

Thanks! I’m working on a couple more now…stay tuned.

By: Vampire

Vampire — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 00:29:00 +0000

Im a big fan Rex, your work is flawless in caputuring the imagination. Scary stories in hell aint got shit on you!

By: Clitoris Rex

Clitoris Rex — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 16:00:20 +0000

Wow. So I felt compelled to respond to this…not sure if this is for real or not, but I wanted to let you know that for some reason, whenever I see it, I see the ruthless and vile taking over after all the order breaks down. So thanks for recognizing that. As for your story, I’m blown away, if its true. Stay strong, the cool part is that the world is not like that all the time, and it definitely isn’t the way it is in my stories.

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 20:49:54 +0000

I can not form a connection with any of your characters so far because they are all so dark and unlikable, but I really appreciate the story. Somebody’s gotta tell the dark tales of how the bad guys survive in the zombie apocalypse. If there ever was a zombie breakout, shit like this WOULD happen. A few years back, I was really depressed and financially strapped. I met a man at a gas station who said he was looking to hire someone as a secretary for his small business. Skeptical, I took his number and called him at a pay phone a few weeks later after my electrcity was disconnected. Unfortunately for me, the secretary position had been filled and I was to become a whore, serving Mexicans in a trailer park, Thursday-Saturday, when their paychecks were cashed and their lust was high. I lasted less than a month. I’d be at my desk job during the day, anxious that I’d be discovered by my coworkers whenever my pimp came in to check on me, nervous in the grocery store near my house which was frequented by the same Mexicans I served, hoping they wouldn’t recognize me without the wig, nauseaus and ashamed when I looked at my daughter and thought about what I did and in utter disbelief that such a world existed. That was about 6 years ago now, but to this day I wonder whatever became of a girl who was whoring with me…a beautiful senior in high school whose crackhead dad asked no questions about the large man who came every evening to pick her up for work so long as the money poured in…and I use the term “pour” loosely at $40 a pop…believe me, I know the dark side of humanity.

By: CyanTerrorist

CyanTerrorist — Sat, 28 Feb 2009 03:27:59 +0000

Can somebody explain the part in italics to me? The ending?

It was good, I just didn’t understand it.

By: Clitoris Rex

Clitoris Rex — Mon, 15 Dec 2008 20:15:32 +0000

Nope. Just a Lutheran kid who fell asleep in Church.

By: Andre

Andre — Sun, 14 Dec 2008 06:14:37 +0000

Dark as hell and really on the sick side. (You must be Catholic or at least have gone to Catholic school.) Too much of a gross out for me but keep writing.

By: eduardo

eduardo — Tue, 02 Dec 2008 20:29:45 +0000

sorry didnt like it….. Too….. fucked up

everyone likes d. eagles so much when they are complete overkill

By: Ricardo

Ricardo — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 05:01:35 +0000

Now this is the good stuff man!! Real Zombie action, it’s like blood splattered poetry, dude.

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By: the girl

the girl — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 15:16:58 +0000

You know how to write and the images you describe are vivid and haunting. I love reading your take on the dark and disturbed, although not my favorite topic, you do it well.