Comments on: MARKER by Ryan L Gordon

By: Ryan L Gordon

Ryan L Gordon — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 02:58:36 +0000

Thank you all for the feedback. Marker and Marker 2 are but reflections of a greater unknown. Who these men are pales when weighed against what they might become now that the lights are out. Stay tuned for Marker 3…….

By: A.WOODS

A.WOODS — Sun, 14 Jun 2009 00:17:16 +0000

Perfect.

By: Mjr Malpractice

Mjr Malpractice — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 06:58:54 +0000

Excellent message about survival and hope existing when you think there is none at all.

By: JR

JR — Mon, 23 Mar 2009 04:49:53 +0000

Im hooked, when do we get to read more?

By: BrandonLayng

BrandonLayng — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 11:55:05 +0000

That’s effective micro fiction. Reminded me of “Lord of the Flies” a little, with a zombie head instead of a pig head. Adult survivors driven to desperate acts to inspire hope and feel hope.

By: Thomas

Thomas — Sun, 01 Feb 2009 17:01:49 +0000

At first I was going to scream about an unfinished work being posted, but I would have been in error to do so. I DO want more about this team of hunters to be sure, but being a survivor of the Z war I must say I would feel very secure in their sector.
Thomas von Klenk, Sub commander,Valley Forge Free Zone.

By: Iffy

Iffy — Fri, 23 Jan 2009 06:13:30 +0000

Liked the message, keep up the good work!

By: Zoe

Zoe — Mon, 19 Jan 2009 02:38:18 +0000

Yes, more please.

By: Piratepete

Piratepete — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 20:35:47 +0000

wow. There are short stories and short stories, and thats a short story. Managed to get the message across nicely though. Lets have some more.