Comments on: MARKER 2 by Ryan L. Gordon

By: Agent Anachronism

Agent Anachronism — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 08:34:44 +0000

Would’ve liked to see how this develops. It’s a very good start, had me sitting on the edge of my seat.

By: Ryan

Ryan — Sun, 28 Jun 2009 01:22:39 +0000

Thanks all for the feedback. “Marker” and “Marker 2″ are snapshots in time, brisk attempts to peer into the lives of those struggling in the (midst?) aftermath of a zombie apocalypse. “Marker 3″ most likely will not expand beyond what is known, rather provide another window into the calm, the storm and the damned.

Ryan L Gordon

By: jfbranson

jfbranson — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 03:24:37 +0000

This wasn’t a short story but it wasn’t haiku either. What’s the hurry to post? Finish the scene, at least.

By: Ben

Ben — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 13:05:46 +0000

This story is great but i hope you wright more so i can see what happens

By: mark

mark — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 06:49:03 +0000

More more dear god more!! Please don’t keep up waiting.

Mark

By: Jen

Jen — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 19:39:37 +0000

Hey this is a start to a great story!! Keep it up I can’t wait to see what happens next!!!

By: Jake

Jake — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 04:28:04 +0000

the suspense is killing me…hehe
I would read this if it were to get longer:)
however i did find it to be a little…. hm… wats the word…
nvm… keep up the good work:)

By: Nate

Nate — Thu, 28 May 2009 04:13:44 +0000

Although well written, I think this story is incomplete. While its similar to being left with a cliff-hanger, I don’t think the story ever left the ground. If this were to be the first chapter of a story, however, I would keep reading.

By: Gunldesnapper

Gunldesnapper — Wed, 27 May 2009 12:37:06 +0000

Ya, im not a fan of short stories at all. On the other hand i liked what you wrote and i would love to read more!