Comments on: UN-LIFE IN A SMALL TOWN by David M. Youngquist

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 17:42:30 +0000

This story was very engaging. The descriptions were vivid, but not long-winded. The characters were realistic and crafted so that you feel a connection with each one. I look forward to reading more from you.

By: David Youngquist

David Youngquist — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 17:05:53 +0000

Thanks for the kind words, Craig. Do you have a website I can look up some of your work?

By: Craig Wilson

Craig Wilson — Tue, 25 Aug 2009 00:28:01 +0000

Great story!! I liked the pacing and the visuals through out. I’m a indepedent film maker and the story real came alive for me with all the specific details of the surrounding commnunities and ways of life. Please continue submitting more storis and wish you great success with all of them.

By: J. Roy

J. Roy — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 17:25:28 +0000

I really enjoyed this story. You left yourself alot of room for a sequel, if you ever want to write one. I’d love to read it. I have stories of my own, but I’m not sure if I have the guts to submit them.
J.Roy

By: Bret Hammond

Bret Hammond — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 05:49:59 +0000

Wow. As a guy from a town of 800 people in Illinois, this story really spoke to me. This is exactly the kind of stuff I’ve had floating around in my head for a while. Great job. Great characters. I’m more of a traditionalist (I like my zombies slow) but you handled the mythos very well! Really drew me in.

By: John Kilborn

John Kilborn — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 23:06:55 +0000

Great story! Had a good flow and I enjoyed the descriptions. Just found this site and right off the bat I find a good story! Look forward to any future writing you do!

By: Dave

Dave — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 22:49:22 +0000

Very good read, hope you post another, thanks

By: Tom

Tom — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 18:12:44 +0000

We live on the north side of Chicago. I grew up in the burbs here and my wife moved here when she finished college. We’re back there every couple months to see her family though.

By: David Youngquist

David Youngquist — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 03:26:13 +0000

Dang, this is a small world. Yeah, I live in Tiskilwa. I took the Snareville name from a cemetary over in Stark County. Where do you live now? I know Martin, have a few friends that worked there.