Comments on: BLOOD RIDERS by Molly Campbell

By: Brenda

Brenda — Sun, 25 Jul 2010 16:00:02 +0000

Luv your story, characters, situation can’t wait to read more from you thanks Brenda

By: yorkshire kev

yorkshire kev — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 22:37:14 +0000

sweeeeeeeeeeeetttt

By: Billy

Billy — Fri, 18 Sep 2009 03:15:20 +0000

Very good work Molly. My mind’s eye fleshed out your narrative nicely. Zombie books and stories could be your cash cow. If you write it, they will come…..

By: Joanne

Joanne — Fri, 18 Sep 2009 01:55:54 +0000

Good story, Molly. I like how the diary just stops.

By: Paul

Paul — Sun, 13 Sep 2009 05:03:42 +0000

Good tale. Stylistically, I’d prefer if you tiptoed in then turned on the violence. The ending struck a good balance; left me alert and wary.

By: JJ

JJ — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 15:09:06 +0000

This was an exellent tale – one of your best, I’d say. Great pacing throughout, with a clear sense of conflict and danger. The constant threat here really moved the plot along, and with each new discovery from the journal came a greater expectation of tragedy. Fantastic! JJ

By: Greg

Greg — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 14:49:15 +0000

Excellent story, with a lot of unique elements – thank you for giving me a new potential cause to be vigilant about; knowledge is power!

By: MJ

MJ — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 11:07:16 +0000

What a story! It developed slowly and well, just enough details to feed our imaginations and care for the main characters.

Add me to the list of readers wanting more.

By: Molly

Molly — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:32:10 +0000

Hi all,

Thanks for the wonderful comments!

Editor: any way possible to change the underlined text to italics? Please.

The girls go with Kate to Normal.

I usually write stage plays, so this was an unusual twist for me, but based on the majority of the comments, I better start writing more of this

Molly