Comments on: LEAVING LIMINALITY by Pete Bevan

By: s.hershie

s.hershie — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 10:36:35 +0000

Pete i am lost for words,again. i am so glad to have found TotZW, it has been what uhh a little more than a week and i cant stop reading. instead of sleeping i read. im o to the next Tale

By: JKnWWZ

JKnWWZ — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 09:06:26 +0000

Great Story Pete! Loved your Minister Series as well. Reading from beginning to end and am up to Sept 09. Always get excited when I see your stories come up for that month!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! JK

By: L Martin

L Martin — Sat, 12 Jun 2010 00:16:00 +0000

I really enjoyed this story. I hope write a sequel to it.

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 14:42:07 +0000

This was a great story and really gave me a deeper insight into my own interest in zombies.

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 21:17:21 +0000

Well spotted Petey. I know who the character is as thats who I was referring to, however I meant to Google his name before the final draft. Must have missed it.

By: Angie Ager

Angie Ager — Wed, 21 Oct 2009 20:51:34 +0000

Loving your work Pete. Your thoughts and views are very close to my own and they are brilliantly interpreted through your nameless hero. Respect X

By: Petey

Petey — Fri, 16 Oct 2009 02:16:03 +0000

Good introspection and description, but S.D. “Snake” Plissken is the character from Carpenter’s Escape from New York and Escape from L.A. The factual error at the very end causes an aware reader to stumble.

By: Curtis

Curtis — Sun, 04 Oct 2009 04:49:00 +0000

Im speechless! This is possibly the single greaest stories of personal growth and self realization I have ever read, and in a zombie theme to top it off. Only one real comment, KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By: Steve

Steve — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 17:12:16 +0000

This is my favorite story on this site. I re-read it every week or so. I’m no netrosexual, bit I love the transition of this guy from a pretty boy to a real man. I love how you worked the story about running with the children into the story. Verywell written, one of my favorite stories of all time, not just in the zombie genre!