http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Wed, 10 Mar 2010 08:02:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-6230 Agent Anachronism Mon, 05 Oct 2009 03:09:18 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-6230 Was a good story. Had a small problem following the POV for a bit. Also had a problem believing that Jackson would die from massive blood loss after running into a cactus. Other than that, pretty good. Was a good story. Had a small problem following the POV for a bit. Also had a problem believing that Jackson would die from massive blood loss after running into a cactus. Other than that, pretty good.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-6149 zombie515 Wed, 30 Sep 2009 19:37:48 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-6149 I loved this story! I hope u write more godd stories as this one! Keep up the good work! I loved this story! I hope u write more godd stories as this one! Keep up the good work!

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5897 Liam O'Riley Sat, 19 Sep 2009 06:29:17 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5897 I stand corrected by Molly. I stand corrected by Molly.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5890 Molly Sat, 19 Sep 2009 03:50:22 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5890 You have great descriptions and compelling characters, however, I had trouble following the POV beginning with the paragraph "Jackson sat upright..." Keep writing, and please consider tightening up your prose. You have great descriptions and compelling characters, however, I had trouble following the POV beginning with the paragraph “Jackson sat upright…” Keep writing, and please consider tightening up your prose.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5867 Liam O'Riley Fri, 18 Sep 2009 05:44:23 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5867 Terrific. The prose and story were both excellent. Write more. Terrific. The prose and story were both excellent. Write more.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5705 rob Mon, 14 Sep 2009 07:20:00 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5705 yeah great keep it up hope to you write more yeah great keep it up hope to you write more

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5686 jfbranson Sun, 13 Sep 2009 03:42:20 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5686 not bad. you've packed a heck of a lot into such a short story, though. keep writing. not bad. you’ve packed a heck of a lot into such a short story, though. keep writing.

]]> http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/09/10/and-the-flies-will-follow-by-grant-wamack/comment-page-1/#comment-5649 Rob Fri, 11 Sep 2009 15:48:52 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=270#comment-5649 I liked this alot. I wanted to hear more though. Mya is tougher than is lead on to believe. Keep up the good writing. I liked this alot. I wanted to hear more though. Mya is tougher than is lead on to believe. Keep up the good writing.

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