Comments on: ORIGINAL DOCUMENTS by martybegan

By: robsquill

robsquill — Sat, 25 Dec 2010 05:06:36 +0000

Engrossing. At the beginning of the outbreak, nobody knows what they’re up against and we watch in horror at the inexorable advance of the outbreak. The one unanswered question is the exact source of the outbreak. What killed the campers? Who is zombie zero?

By: ScottB

ScottB — Thu, 27 May 2010 19:33:27 +0000

I’d hazard a guess you work in the medical proffesion. If not then good research into the way notes are written.

Although I can’t see why you’d take someone’s SATS for a bite. Although depending on the equipment I guess it would tell you when you took the pulse…

I’ll shut up. It was great.

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 00:13:28 +0000

Great story!

By: E.R. Harrington

E.R. Harrington — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 05:28:32 +0000

Reads like official documents would have been written, but that only adds to the drama. Very well written!

By: Terry Schultz

Terry Schultz — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 02:10:16 +0000

Love the 911 call at the end, really really creepy.

By: Mott

Mott — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 17:26:00 +0000

A very well written story, wouldn’t sound any more real if it actually was.

By: Tasha

Tasha — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 16:26:42 +0000

Chills, severe chills. This was great! To see even more history then the book offers is fantastic. Just goes to show not just the big stories but the little ones are just as important too.

By: Juni

Juni — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 16:18:55 +0000

This was fantastic. More, please.

By: len

len — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 05:36:26 +0000

I loved it…..love the Flushing setting too. Only in Flushing…they have everything…now Zombies. Zombies in Kessina Park!