Comments on: THE BOY by Pete Bevan

By: Zombie_Hunter_6

Zombie_Hunter_6 — Sat, 07 Aug 2010 16:30:50 +0000

DBZ OWNZ! Like this story, It’s amazingly detailed and it’s just like a kid’s thinking, I love it.

By: s.hershie

s.hershie — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 09:43:12 +0000

awsome story pete im glad i found this, well at least his mother saved him eh? its kinda funny cuz im on my dsi hehe

By: JKnWWZ

JKnWWZ — Tue, 06 Jul 2010 06:19:34 +0000

Another GREAT from Pete!!
I already read Minister 3 so this was an Awesome surprise! Keep up the great work!
JK

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 13:36:53 +0000

Thanks Dan.

There are four parts to the Minister in this order:

The Minister
The Minister Part 2
The Boy
The Minister Part 3

You are the second person to comment on that Zombie line. I thought it would be as a 7 year old boy would see it, having not seen one before and with his parents shielding him from what was going on in the wider world. Hey, you can’t have every line work.

If you want to keep track of my stories then there is a facebook fan page on the link through my name below. My Zombie army is up to 49 people as of last night, but no-one from TOWWZ I think.

By: Dan Powell

Dan Powell — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 05:52:20 +0000

This is the first of your stories I have read and what a corker. The tension building in the care is multiplied greatly by the boy’s slowly dawning understanding of what is happening. The only thing to break the spell for me was the line ‘Oh…my..God ..its a Zombie.’ It kind of broke the tension and focus of the child’s eye view telling us something we already know.

Having read the epilogue of this tale and some of the comment, I can see I need to dig into the archive and catch up on the ‘Minister’ stories.

Great story.

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 20:14:54 +0000

@Rob

All The Minister stories are on this site, so now you have no excuse!

By: Rob MacLeod

Rob MacLeod — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 04:37:13 +0000

Good story, I’m not familiar with the Minister Chronicles, so the lat part lost me. But the rest was really well crafted. Nice work Pete, I look forward to more of your stuff.

By: Kevin

Kevin — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:25:25 +0000

Awesome tie-in Pete. Your stories are great. I love the “Minister Chronicles” Hope to see more before x-mas.

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 22:19:59 +0000

sorted. i’ve sent you a mail.