Comments on: BEES DO IT by Jeffrey DeRego http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:15:07 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Retrobuck http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-8540 Retrobuck Thu, 19 Aug 2010 14:55:50 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-8540 I really enjoyed this story, but for some reason I'm hearing Garrison Keillor's voice for the narrator.... I really enjoyed this story, but for some reason I’m hearing Garrison Keillor’s voice for the narrator….

]]> By: Brad http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7279 Brad Tue, 29 Dec 2009 23:52:29 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7279 Great Story, I forgot it was a zombie theme with all of the human aspects. I agree with everyone that an anthology or book is a must! One question, (not to poke holes in the story...) Why didn't they take the gun from the Scout? If ammo is at a premium plus would it be wise to have someone shooting out from inside in the midst of a group of revelers? Please keep writing! Great Story, I forgot it was a zombie theme with all of the human aspects. I agree with everyone that an anthology or book is a must! One question, (not to poke holes in the story…) Why didn’t they take the gun from the Scout? If ammo is at a premium plus would it be wise to have someone shooting out from inside in the midst of a group of revelers?

Please keep writing!

]]> By: Boogersugar http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7276 Boogersugar Mon, 28 Dec 2009 07:35:13 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7276 Love your stories. They were definately an inspiration to start my own survivalist stories. Hopefully the first one get's posted. Very, very well done! Love your stories. They were definately an inspiration to start my own survivalist stories. Hopefully the first one get’s posted. Very, very well done!

]]> By: Pete Bevan http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7266 Pete Bevan Wed, 23 Dec 2009 08:47:05 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7266 Meh. Proofreading and editting, for me its 75% of the writing process, and the dullest part. However, when its finished, and you are happy, its all worth it. Meh. Proofreading and editting, for me its 75% of the writing process, and the dullest part. However, when its finished, and you are happy, its all worth it.

]]> By: jrderego http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7259 jrderego Tue, 22 Dec 2009 22:50:31 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7259 Thanks Grenade, good eye. Sometimes things slip through the editing process. This was one if them. Thanks Grenade, good eye. Sometimes things slip through the editing process. This was one if them.

]]> By: grenade http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7258 grenade Mon, 21 Dec 2009 23:05:41 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7258 i'm not through reading, but i think part 3 could use a little clarification in the dialog. it gets confusing as to whom is saying what. it becomes clear a few more lines in, but then i have to go back and re-read it. i’m not through reading, but i think part 3 could use a little clarification in the dialog. it gets confusing as to whom is saying what. it becomes clear a few more lines in, but then i have to go back and re-read it.

]]> By: Zoe http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7225 Zoe Tue, 15 Dec 2009 16:39:58 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7225 Leave a comment Sweet Like Maple Sugar is my very favorite story on this site, this one was great as well. More please. I would love to hear more about the goat boy and how his life is going. Leave a comment

Sweet Like Maple Sugar is my very favorite story on this site, this one was great as well. More please. I would love to hear more about the goat boy and how his life is going.

]]> By: Aaron http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7201 Aaron Mon, 14 Dec 2009 02:06:45 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7201 Well done Jeff! I was so wrapped up in the turmoil of other humans that I completely forgot about the zombie threat. You've created a very colorful community in Pleasant Hollow. I look forward to more. Well done Jeff! I was so wrapped up in the turmoil of other humans that I completely forgot about the zombie threat. You’ve created a very colorful community in Pleasant Hollow. I look forward to more.

]]> By: Terry Schultz http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2009/12/02/bees-do-it-by-jeffrey-derego/comment-page-1/#comment-7191 Terry Schultz Sun, 13 Dec 2009 02:53:55 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=379#comment-7191 I love coming to this site and seeing your name. The community depicted in your stories and capturing little by little from such different perspectives is amazing. please keep writing. I love coming to this site and seeing your name. The community depicted in your stories and capturing little by little from such different perspectives is amazing. please keep writing.

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