Comments on: BRIDESHEAD BEACH by Tom Hamilton

By: Von

Von — Sat, 04 Jun 2011 08:18:05 +0000

It was good and all, but you had the two main men, Captain Enervy and Captain Granderson, survive some ridiculously nasty wounds. After all, if some big woman plunged a knife into a normal human’s eye, twice, with enough force to coat the handle in gore, than they would not be getting back up, ever. Even Captain Granderson was shot twice, once in each shoulder, with enough force to cause a geyser of blood to spring forth. Afterwards, he was only on the ground for less than a minute before he,” Sprang” back up and ready to fight. No human can obtain these wounds and be expected to fight, move, or even live. The unrealistic recovery of the two main men distracted me from the story and made the whole thing seem poorly planned.

By: james glenn

james glenn — Mon, 11 Apr 2011 16:28:16 +0000

you probly allready know this but
PHAT STORY!
keep writing this is the first one ive read from you hoping theres more
zombie snuff porn
(feignes masturbation and leeres like a chimp)
BAhaha 10/10 man 10/10

By: vanessa

vanessa — Mon, 27 Dec 2010 19:49:24 +0000

I have to admit this one was a little hard to read. Hard as it is for some to admit, there would be women, men and even children who would be forced into that kind of life just to survive.
It was an excellent story, and true to the brutality humans are capable of when they know they can get away with it.

By: Clement S.

Clement S. — Sat, 21 Aug 2010 19:08:55 +0000

Tedious and indulgent. This story reminded me of a poorly made “Lifetime” movie plastered together by soap opera acting. That said, I was surprised to find some very well written lines and descriptions. Will have to read more of your work to get a better balance of your talent. Indeed, you do have talent.

By: Scott B

Scott B — Sat, 15 May 2010 16:43:38 +0000

Great story man, although I must agree with Pete that she was a bit lucky.

Also, I’d hope that the Army would be a little more… proffesional in the event of a Zombie Apocalypse. I’m sure the British Army would.

By: Brad

Brad — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 02:18:11 +0000

Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Don’t worry about the bashers, apparently when society breaks down we’ll all hold hands and make smores together.

I loved the direction you went. Undoubtedly there will be this population represented as well, ( at least in my mind) who revert to the baser instincts and capitalize on others misfortunes. As for the morality, those readers should read some of the Marquis DeSades works, he was French nobility and far cruder than you. Bravo for a fun story!!!

By: Cherry Darling

Cherry Darling — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 15:58:46 +0000

Very intriguing tale! I hope Kathryn makes it.

By: cdugger

cdugger — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 16:07:47 +0000

So, to all you detractors:
You want a Zombie Apocalypse story in which all of the characters are totally equal, everyone is treated fairly and justly, and nobody has any obsessions or perversions of any kind. Does that about cover it?

Well, Ryan, you’re just gonna have to take this site off the web, my man. It seems to me that EVERY story here has (gasp!) a BAD GUY! Or a stupid person, or a mean person, or something.

People, if you don’t get the fact that Zombie stories are NOT ABOUT ZOMBIES, you need to go read Jane Austen. Zombie stories are about US. And, we, the People, are generally base, selfish beings.

Yes, there are those who would sacrifice. Those who are honorable. Those who, in fact, care about our fellow humans. We, however, are so far in the minority that we would be overcome by the survivors long before the Zombies would get us.

If you don’t like seeing the base nature of humans, DON’T READ THE STORIES that are posted here. These authors (and I have submitted stories myself) don’t mind a critic, but don’t be a jerk.

I loved the story. Other that a few, minor grammatical errors, it was a great Zombie story showing the good and the bad. The hero was a woman, so I fail to see how the story, or the author, could be considered misogynistic.

By: Jeff

Jeff — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 21:12:20 +0000

Well written but just out and out filthy, try not to focus so much on gore…and the part about making a zombie cum? Just disgusting and i think dirty purely for the sake of being dirty