Comments on: DEADLY COMMUTE by William Robinson http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 04:50:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: funky_muzic http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-9527 funky_muzic Wed, 12 Jan 2011 20:08:28 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-9527 Awesome! Of course I just read this since I just saw that the sequel was posted (which I haven't read just yet). This story is one of the best that I've ready on here yet. I also liked the beginning where Daniel was playing the video game (was it Left 4 Dead)? It so happened that I was riding the train (BART) to work while I was reading this, so the story definitely creeped me out. I can't wait to read Part 2...right now! Awesome! Of course I just read this since I just saw that the sequel was posted (which I haven’t read just yet).
This story is one of the best that I’ve ready on here yet. I also liked the beginning where Daniel was playing the video game (was it Left 4 Dead)?
It so happened that I was riding the train (BART) to work while I was reading this, so the story definitely creeped me out. I can’t wait to read Part 2…right now!

]]> By: Zombie_Hunter_6 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-8527 Zombie_Hunter_6 Mon, 16 Aug 2010 19:06:24 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-8527 That was epic, the only thing I would say was the Hoodie was really common, but then came out with a couple of words that would suggest he was well-read. Other than that I loved it! That was epic, the only thing I would say was the Hoodie was really common, but then came out with a couple of words that would suggest he was well-read. Other than that I loved it!

]]> By: Josh http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-8307 Josh Tue, 29 Jun 2010 08:27:29 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-8307 wow that was awesome hope for a second telling of what become of "Daniel's Army" wow that was awesome hope for a second telling of what become of “Daniel’s Army”

]]> By: ScottB http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-8094 ScottB Fri, 14 May 2010 21:46:42 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-8094 I really enjoyed that, very much. I loved it when hoodie said, "I don't mean to be a cliche". Very nice. However, I did notice a few spelling errors. Also, when one chap said, "we must be a hundred miles from the sea." Actually in Britain you are never more than 70.2 miles away from the sea. As you can imagine though, neither of those things even remotley ruined it for me. Keep it up man. I really enjoyed that, very much. I loved it when hoodie said, “I don’t mean to be a cliche”. Very nice.

However, I did notice a few spelling errors. Also, when one chap said, “we must be a hundred miles from the sea.” Actually in Britain you are never more than 70.2 miles away from the sea.

As you can imagine though, neither of those things even remotley ruined it for me. Keep it up man.

]]> By: anarchy112 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-7555 anarchy112 Wed, 10 Mar 2010 16:38:57 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-7555 that was an amazing story dude that was an amazing story dude

]]> By: Drew Fuller http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-7543 Drew Fuller Tue, 09 Mar 2010 17:18:00 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-7543 I really enjoyed the turn at the intro with the x-box. Also, you have a really solid voice throughout. I really liked the British feel. I really enjoyed the turn at the intro with the x-box. Also, you have a really solid voice throughout. I really liked the British feel.

]]> By: Ben Grove http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-7516 Ben Grove Tue, 02 Mar 2010 10:56:32 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-7516 Loved it loved it loved it. I've done that London train commute in the past and could picture that a scene at Waterloo Station. Great used of traditional British weaponry -the umbrella. Loved it loved it loved it. I’ve done that London train commute in the past and could picture that a scene at Waterloo Station. Great used of traditional British weaponry -the umbrella.

]]> By: Brad http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-7513 Brad Mon, 01 Mar 2010 01:06:26 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-7513 Great story, very entertaining! Great story, very entertaining!

]]> By: Clicint http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/01/deadly-commute-by-william-robinson/#comment-7498 Clicint Fri, 26 Feb 2010 04:01:14 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=411#comment-7498 IT WAS GREAT!! i like the x box beginning, i thought the battle had already begun :) I'm ready for part 2. I like Virgil, or Hoodie! IT WAS GREAT!! i like the x box beginning, i thought the battle had already begun :)
I’m ready for part 2. I like Virgil, or Hoodie!

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