Comments on: LAST DAY AT WORK by T.J. McFadden http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/ Stories of the zombie apocalypse. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 04:50:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: john http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-10486 john Wed, 21 Sep 2011 22:15:36 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-10486 mint!:) mint!:)

]]> By: waqas http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-10457 waqas Sun, 18 Sep 2011 16:28:21 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-10457 i just read my comment... Apologize for the typos seems like i have a nasty habit of posting first and reading later :P i just read my comment… Apologize for the typos seems like i have a nasty habit of posting first and reading later :P

]]> By: waqas http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-10456 waqas Sun, 18 Sep 2011 16:25:32 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-10456 you've got a great mind for plot and detail... and i kind of get the way your mind works been reading up all the stories you have posted hare... andi am very impressed... i'm a fan for sure... and for all the people who are confused why unarmed security would have so many guns... we he was planning to kill some students and the piss ant director to blow off some steam for getting fired...... :) mail me some times... i would truly like to proof anything you write... and would mine befriending a person with an exquisite mind like yours... waqas.rabbani@live.com you’ve got a great mind for plot and detail… and i kind of get the way your mind works been reading up all the stories you have posted hare… andi am very impressed… i’m a fan for sure…

and for all the people who are confused why unarmed security would have so many guns… we he was planning to kill some students and the piss ant director to blow off some steam for getting fired……

:)

mail me some times… i would truly like to proof anything you write…

and would mine befriending a person with an exquisite mind like yours…

waqas.rabbani@live.com

]]> By: T.J. McFadden http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-9962 T.J. McFadden Wed, 27 Apr 2011 00:23:00 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-9962 Try opening a second window to Youtube and playing Butthole Surfers' "Pepper" in the background as they go out the door. It's fun. :-) Try opening a second window to Youtube and playing Butthole Surfers’ “Pepper” in the background as they go out the door. It’s fun. :-)

]]> By: L Martin http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-8252 L Martin Thu, 10 Jun 2010 22:02:39 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-8252 Absolutely Loved It ! I suspected something when he had all the weapons in his locker and extra ammo but the bomb in the car was a sweet twist to the story! Absolutely Loved It !
I suspected something when he had all the weapons in his locker and extra ammo but the bomb in the car was a sweet twist to the story!

]]> By: Wrenage http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-7653 Wrenage Fri, 19 Mar 2010 20:35:46 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-7653 I liked it. It was a fun story with a nice twist. The only improvements I can think of are also some "cliche" things. Like I personally get tired of the whiney bureaucrat stereotype. I liked it. It was a fun story with a nice twist.

The only improvements I can think of are also some “cliche” things. Like I personally get tired of the whiney bureaucrat stereotype.

]]> By: Ole_Salty_Union_Cracker_jack http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-7650 Ole_Salty_Union_Cracker_jack Fri, 19 Mar 2010 18:14:35 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-7650 so, I never, and I mean I NEVER leave comments about stories, until now, BRAVO!!!! so nicely done, I loved it!!!!!! kinda seemed a little reminiscent of beverly hills cop but I loved how he just goes about the "duties" of his "Job" like killin zombies is just ALL he has been waiting for!!!!, EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!!! so, I never, and I mean I NEVER leave comments about stories, until now,

BRAVO!!!! so nicely done, I loved it!!!!!!
kinda seemed a little reminiscent of beverly hills cop but I loved how he just goes about the “duties” of his “Job” like killin zombies is just ALL he has been waiting for!!!!, EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!!!

]]> By: Jim http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-7587 Jim Sun, 14 Mar 2010 19:27:26 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-7587 Good story, nice witty prose. I enjoyed it quite a bit, and got all the subtleties. This is a FUN zed story, and, in that regard, a welcome and refreshing change of pace from the de riguer melancholy Cormac McCarthy-style zed stuff that's been popping up of late. Good story, nice witty prose. I enjoyed it quite a bit, and got all the subtleties. This is a FUN zed story, and, in that regard, a welcome and refreshing change of pace from the de riguer melancholy Cormac McCarthy-style zed stuff that’s been popping up of late.

]]> By: Les http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2010/02/22/last-day-at-work-by-t-j-mcfadden/#comment-7558 Les Thu, 11 Mar 2010 01:12:23 +0000 http://www.talesofworldwarz.com/stories/?p=413#comment-7558 This is a great story. Techniques improve with experience. Don't let the nay sayers get to you. Keep at it and give us another great story. This is a great story. Techniques improve with experience. Don’t let the nay sayers get to you. Keep at it and give us another great story.

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