Comments on: LAST DAY AT WORK by T.J. McFadden

By: L Martin

L Martin — Thu, 10 Jun 2010 22:02:39 +0000

Absolutely Loved It !
I suspected something when he had all the weapons in his locker and extra ammo but the bomb in the car was a sweet twist to the story!

By: Wrenage

Wrenage — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 20:35:46 +0000

I liked it. It was a fun story with a nice twist.

The only improvements I can think of are also some “cliche” things. Like I personally get tired of the whiney bureaucrat stereotype.

By: Ole_Salty_Union_Cracker_jack

Ole_Salty_Union_Cracker_jack — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 18:14:35 +0000

so, I never, and I mean I NEVER leave comments about stories, until now,

BRAVO!!!! so nicely done, I loved it!!!!!!
kinda seemed a little reminiscent of beverly hills cop but I loved how he just goes about the “duties” of his “Job” like killin zombies is just ALL he has been waiting for!!!!, EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!!!

By: Jim

Jim — Sun, 14 Mar 2010 19:27:26 +0000

Good story, nice witty prose. I enjoyed it quite a bit, and got all the subtleties. This is a FUN zed story, and, in that regard, a welcome and refreshing change of pace from the de riguer melancholy Cormac McCarthy-style zed stuff that’s been popping up of late.

By: Les

Les — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 01:12:23 +0000

This is a great story. Techniques improve with experience. Don’t let the nay sayers get to you. Keep at it and give us another great story.

By: itor66

itor66 — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 20:36:08 +0000

Awesome read. What a great turn about from postal to savior. Write more, that was good.

By: Kevin

Kevin — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:10:00 +0000

Oohh Snizap! Dude was gonna columbine the school! I LOVE IT!

By: Jen

Jen — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 01:54:11 +0000

This was a great story! Grammar is important BUT the story speaks for it’s self!! I love that he was going to go “postal” on the school! Gives it a real feeling! Keep up the wonderful work! Can’t wait to read more from you!

By: Renato

Renato — Wed, 03 Mar 2010 23:24:26 +0000

Interesting, I was not much impressed at the beginning but the ending surprised me. It is a good twist

It´s cool how changed the role of your protagonist from villan to hero, and save this to the ending.