Comments on: QUARTERS by William D. Tripp

By: ChaosPeng

ChaosPeng — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 14:20:54 +0000

Incredible poem, i really liked this one. Your wording was just perfect!

By: liz

liz — Mon, 07 Jun 2010 16:44:24 +0000

Extremely nice imagery! Like others I too wince when I see poems come up. Mainly because it seems they try too hard or it’s just very random. BUT yours could be the start of an awesome story in poem form.

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Tue, 25 May 2010 10:53:05 +0000

Another example of great poetry. I must give it a go sometime. I got a nice rich image reading this.

By: Justin

Justin — Tue, 25 May 2010 00:06:50 +0000

Really rich detailing here. The description of the fat man, the irony of children shooting in the arcade. Just really well done stuff, man.

By: gabryl

gabryl — Sun, 23 May 2010 22:26:21 +0000

beautiful execution

By: Mac

Mac — Sat, 22 May 2010 12:47:37 +0000

I’m no poem fan but this paint a picture with a story behind.. Thanks

By: Doc

Doc — Sat, 22 May 2010 09:12:14 +0000

Morbid, but good. I don’t normally like poems, but this one is an exception, well done.

By: Joe

Joe — Fri, 21 May 2010 14:30:07 +0000

Filled with soup??? awesome. really enjoyed the poem

By: uncleb

uncleb — Fri, 21 May 2010 12:42:15 +0000

nice , good work