Comments on: REVENGE by Nick Lloyd

By: Rodrigo .T

Rodrigo .T — Sat, 12 Mar 2011 23:51:02 +0000

One of the best stories here……….dude u r a genius

By: D.M. Youngquist

D.M. Youngquist — Thu, 25 Nov 2010 19:09:56 +0000

Leave a comment Excellent story. Quite original. It’s be interesting to see what happens next. Follow Steve on his journey to new places. Keep with it.

By: Georgia

Georgia — Mon, 22 Nov 2010 05:02:46 +0000

Ha, as soon as the woman said she loves Steve, I figured out that she was his mom.

…some mothers are great mothers, some are awful, and a lot of them, fell in between, and in the bad times, you are going to focus on the bad stuff, especially when his mother, who brought him into this world that is now full of zombies, lead to the death of the wife he chose.

Maybe if the wife had gotten to say goodbye… I dunno.

By: South

South — Tue, 26 Oct 2010 00:59:07 +0000

Very Cool!!! I work in a ship repair facility and your description was very good. Also very fast paced and quick character development. Your writing style left me with a sense of accomplishment after each paragraph. Great story that could spin off in very many different directions. We could follow Steve off on many adventures or stay with the colony as the hordes penetrate their safe zone while they’re locked up. This could send them on journeys of their own.

By: Zombie lover

Zombie lover — Mon, 11 Oct 2010 12:29:50 +0000

wow. best story here so far! your character was so human it was scary! at first i thought, oh this sly devil is gonna volunteer to take the old hag to the toilet with the zombie underneath. your ending was so much better. and the twist? perfect and grim. loved it. i was at first confused, thinking, why would this old hag say she loved him, what a stupid ending to a good story. man. i was wrong good sir. very wrong. i am now going to search your older stuff. keep it up!!!

ps: wished for a little bit more physical discription of your characters, steve ended up looking like rick from the walking dead comics.

By: Keith Wilson

Keith Wilson — Tue, 28 Sep 2010 14:57:53 +0000

Loved this story from start to finish. Like other I could really see the dock yard in my mind. Those containers would make a great place to live in an emergency. Good work. Fagface, as his wife had been killed there would be nothing keeping him in one place any longer, plus I don’t think he would be allowed to stay there for much longer anyway after what he had just done. I also thought it was bad that he took the boat when he left, but then when I read it again it does say the only other way out of the compound was through a gate that needed 3 people to open. Maybe you should work on your comments more next time

By: fagface mcgee

fagface mcgee — Sun, 26 Sep 2010 09:35:19 +0000

why on earth did he leave the fortified, safe camp and take their only escape with him? maybe work on the story more next time

By: Jake

Jake — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 16:09:10 +0000

AWESOME STORY!!! really enjoyed this from start to finish. Great ending too!

By: diggles

diggles — Sun, 01 Aug 2010 02:50:33 +0000

Wow that ending! I knew, based on the title, that he was going to kill the old woman somehow, and that way was totally brilliant!

And I was taken completely by surprise by “goodbye mother”. That was a wonderful twist! Great story.