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STEPPING OUT By James Abel
July 29, 2013  Short stories   

 

Glen watched the monitors carefully, still seeing no movement for the fifth day in a row.  He had been noting a gradual decline in zombie activity over the past two months, but the last five days had been totally devoid of any activity at all, even animal movement.  When the outbreak had first occurred, Glen was the only one he knew that had been prepared.  The total breakdown of social order was something for which he had been ready for a long time.  The idea that the event would be precipitated by walking, flesh-eating corpses was something that surprised the hell out of even him.  As disturbing as it was to watch men, women, and children being eaten alive, Glen still reacted in pretty much the same way as he would have if the entire U.S. population would have started rioting at the same time.  He walked to his security control panel, typed in a few commands and locked everything outside.  Glen’s home had been converted from an old brick building and had been modified to withstand all forms of break-in or unwanted entry.  He sometimes joked that it could withstand anything short of a direct nuclear attack.  Although nuclear attack was unlikely, he didn’t have to worry about Molotov cocktails or pipe bombs tossed about by some would-be anarchist.  If regular locks are to keep honest people honest, Glen’s six inch thick steel doors with three inch crossbars were designed to send criminals the fuck home.  Once locked down, Glen knew he was safe inside his home and all he had to do was wait the situation out.  He had enough food and fuel for his generators to last a year if he rationed carefully.

And he had been very careful who he discussed his preparedness with.  In fact, the only person he had talked to had been his brother, David.  He wasn’t sure why he did, only that his brother was the only family he had left after his overbearing bitch of a mother had died.  His relationship with David wasn’t much better as David had always looked down on him like he was some kind of insect.  Once, during one of the few (and last) times his brother had visited him, Glen had shown David the safety measures he had taken.  David had laughed his ass off and told Glen that he was a “paranoid fool who was wasting his money.”  Glen said nothing to counter the accusation, but silently swore if something ever did happen David could find his own fucking shelter.  Shortly after things went bad, that is exactly what happened.  Two days after initiating the lockdown of his home, Glen awoke to a proximity alarm on his main control panel.  His security system had detected movement at the front door.  He looked at the monitor and saw his brother, along with his family, standing outside.  He could see David was yelling something while he pounded on the steel door.  Glen pushed a button to turn on the intercom.

“-us in, Glen!  For god sakes, hurry!  They’re close, you gotta open up!” David yelled.  Glen watched David’s wife, Barb, holding their baby and glancing wildly around.  Henry, that’s his name, Glen thought briefly.  Henry was wearing a blue jumper and holding onto a bottle of milk, trying to drink.  Glen could hear faint moaning in the background.

Glen started to push the buttons to unlock the front door, and then remembered what his brother had said.  How his brother had laughed.

“You laughed at me, Dave.  Remember?  You laughed and said I was a paranoid fool.  Who’s the fool now?” Glen said.  He watched as David backed up and looked quizzically at the intercom, as if he couldn’t quite believe what he just heard.  “Holy fuck, Glen!  I’m sorry I laughed.  You were right, OK?  I’m sorry.  Please, let us in!  My wife and son are out here and those fucking things are getting closer.  We drove through a crowd of them to get here and theyaregettingfuckingcloser!”  David yelled at the intercom.

 

Glen looked again at his sister-in-law and nephew.  He could see tears in her eyes and could hear the baby starting to cry.  He wavered a bit, hand hovering over the control panel to open the front security door.  He could open it, let them in, and have it closed within a minute.

“Sorry.” Was all he could manage.  His brother again looked at the intercom incredulously for a few seconds before he realized what Glen had just done.

“What?  Open the door, Glen!  You can’t do this.  You can’t fucking do -“, David screamed before Glen turned off the intercom.  Even with the sound off, he could hear the faint pounding coming from his front door downstairs.  One other thing he heard before killing the sound was louder moans.  Closer moans.  He continued to watch his brother pound on the door until the first zombie reached them.  A rather large zombie in the shredded remains of his bath robe arrived first.  Part of its neck had been chewed through, exposing a torn esophagus.  David rushed forward to push it away, standing between it and his wife and son.  The zombie latched onto him like some praying mantis from hell and drew him in close.  David fought hard to get away, but the implacable strength of the undead man overcame him.  Glen watched his brother open his mouth in a silent scream as the zombie bit down on his face and pulled away flesh and muscle.  He saw Barb screaming, also, and the baby crying.  She turned to run, causing the baby to drop his bottle, but was met by two more of the undead.  One zombie appeared to be an older man, suit and tie smeared with blood.  The other zombie was a woman with half of her face torn off. The man bit into Barb’s upper arm and the other pulled the infant from her arms.  She lunged for her baby but was stopped by the zombie holding onto her, ripping most of the skin and muscle of arm away with its teeth.  Meanwhile, the woman carried little Henry briefly off camera.  When they appeared on another surveillance camera near the corner of his home, the zombie was holding Henry to her mouth, tearing mouthfuls of flesh away.  Glen felt a slight twinge of guilt at that point, seeing blood running freely from his nephew’s tiny body.

“He shouldn’t have laughed,” Glen said quietly before switching off the monitors.

Now, as he stared at his security monitors, Glen pondered a new development.  Even with all of his planning, Glen hadn’t anticipated how badly he would miss being outside.  Not that he needed to go outside.  He still had plenty of supplies.  He had plenty of books.  But at this point, reading books was like starving and eating a bread crumb to take the edge off.  He didn’t want to go outside, he needed to go outside.  Only that was a mild way to put it.

He craved it.

In polite company, he might admit to being a little stir crazy.  A case of cabin fever, perhaps.  But since he wasn’t in polite company (mainly because polite company had started eating everyone’s brother and their family) he could admit something.

He was going crazy.

Bonkers, ga-ga, loony tunes, completely bat-shit crazy.  All of the above.  Pick your poison.  Glen needed outside.  He had stayed busy the first month watching his monitors and picking up what scattered news reports were on television and radio.  The news was on 24/7 at first, and then it slowed, and finally stopped altogether.  The activity outside his home kept him somewhat distracted, but you could only watch zombies stumbling about so long before your interest waned.  Then, the worst part had started.

Glen had tried to keep a pretty regular schedule, thinking that a regimen would keep him thinking straight.  That it would help him stay clear headed just in case things went south and he had to leave quickly.  He had done well with sleeping a full eight hours a night until halfway through his third month.  Glen had just laid down when he heard it.

A baby’s cry.

Glen sat straight up in bed and swung his feet to the floor.  He paused to listen again and heard nothing.  He listened for another ten minutes before deciding he was hearing things.  Maybe a stray cat getting eaten or something, he thought.  He lay back in his bed and was almost asleep when he heard it again.  The sound was distinct this time and coming from the front of the house.  Glen leapt out of bed, ran to his monitors and flipped them on.  Nothing.  No sign of any movement and no sound.  Glen sat up, watching his monitors and listening.  Although a few zombies passed by, they never stopped and certainly never made a sound other than their awful moaning.  By the time he went back to bed it was 5 o’clock.  He awoke at 6:30 feeling terrible.

That was how it went every night from then on.  There was always something keeping him from sleep.  Pounding coming from downstairs, a scream, and most often was a baby’s cry.  Henry’s cry.  Glen was sure of it, even though he had the sound off when the zombie ate him.  The sounds never happened when he was awake.  Only when he tried to sleep.  Which was all the time, now.  Glen could barely stay awake during the day and, when he would start to drift off, the sounds would start.

He had to get out.  Glen thought that if he could just get outside the sounds would stop.  There was no logic in this, he knew, but he felt in nonetheless.  It was the knowledge of a man who was slowly losing his mind.  An obsession, if you will.  So Glen had started taking notes on the activity outside his home.  He hadn’t seen a zombie in days, so he felt the time was right.  It was time to put an end to the impending madness.

“Time to end that ever-fucking crying” Glen sobbed softly.

Glen pushed the button to unlock his front door, took one final glance at his monitors, and went downstairs.  He grasped the handle of the door, took a long, hitching breath, and opened the door.  Light and a slightly pungent air greeted him.  The air wasn’t as fresh as he would have hoped, having an undertone to it.  Almost like milk does right before it goes all the way bad.  Rot, he thought, rot and death.  Rotten air or no, he felt like a thousand pound weight was being lifted off of his chest.  He glanced left and right and, seeing nothing, took a step outside.

His stepped on something and his foot shot out from under him.  He was able to briefly note that it felt cylindrical in shape before he landed hard on his back.  Glen felt something in his upper back snap and the pain shot through his body.  Before he could help himself he screamed. Loudly.

Loud enough to wake the dead, he thought.  He knew that was close to the truth.  If there were any zombies nearby, they would have heard him.  They would have heard him and would be on their way.  Glen started to push himself up to a sitting position.  Only, he wasn’t moving.  He tried again and noticed that his arms, although they had always done what he had commanded, didn’t move.  They didn’t even twitch.

“Oh, fuck” Glen said.  “Oh no…this is bad.”  He tried to move his legs.  They seemed to be in cahoots with his arms because they, also, refused to budge.  He tried to glance around and succeeded in moving his head a few centimeters and causing himself tremendous agony.  He spotted an object lying near the door to his house.  It was a baby bottle.  It had a clot of black, rotted milk still inside.  That is what he had slipped on.

“Henry’s bottle,” Glen muttered.  He could picture the baby dropping the bottle as his mother tried to run.  She had tried to run because Glen wouldn’t let them in.  He closed his eyes and let out a sigh.  He was close to passing out from the shock and pain.  Then he heard it.  Not a baby’s cry this time, but a chuffing sound.  Like the sound a dog makes when it is sniffing after a gofer in its hole.  The chuffing was getting closer and it was coming from behind him.  He tried to move again, but failed.  His breath was coming in ragged gasps.  Glen felt a small hand grasp his shirt collar and another hand grabbed his ear for purchase.  As the creature pulled itself up to eye level, Glen didn’t recognize the torn, bloody face.  But he did recognize the ragged blue jumper it was wearing.  And he noticed something that he had missed when looking at his nephew through the video monitor.  Henry had cut his first tooth.

34 Comments

  1. Awesome, nice touch with the baby bottle.

    Comment by Joe from Philly on July 29, 2013 @ 2:32 pm

  2. Ouch! That last statement really took my breath away and hung it out to dry.
    Can you imagine the extremely long torture?

    And even if he died and turned into a zombie, he wont be able to move, he would just rot there and never be able to “live” out a zombie life or undeath.

    Couldnt have happened to a nicer guy, Glen did really deserve it.

    Thanks James! Very immersive writing and Great work!

    Comment by bong on July 29, 2013 @ 2:33 pm

  3. Liked the dark ironic touch at the end. A welcome antidote to some of the gungho ramboesque survivalism that pervades much zombie fiction these days. More please, James!

    Comment by Craig Y on July 29, 2013 @ 3:29 pm

  4. Thanks for the kind remarks. This is my first story on this site and I am glad to be able to contribute after reading so many awesome stories here. I definitely have to thank everyone who proof read and gave me suggestions to help me refine the story.

    Comment by JamesAbel on July 29, 2013 @ 4:52 pm

  5. Wow, consumed by a one toothed baby, that could be a very long and painful death. But he deserved it … poor baby though.

    Comment by Jasmine DiAngelo on July 29, 2013 @ 5:01 pm

  6. Yes Jasmine, but he avenged his family right proper!

    Comment by JamesAbel on July 29, 2013 @ 5:22 pm

  7. I was like, ‘Nooooooo’ then I was like, ‘Yesssss!’ Good story James, you say it’s your first, I hope it’s not your last.

    Comment by Justin Dunne on July 29, 2013 @ 7:19 pm

  8. A nice short story about karma.
    And I love creepy zombabies!

    Comment by JT Asher on July 29, 2013 @ 11:06 pm

  9. Bravo James! Send in more work.

    Comment by John the Piper's Son on July 30, 2013 @ 4:38 am

  10. Good story

    Comment by Gunldesnapper on July 30, 2013 @ 6:51 am

  11. Thanks all. I appreciate the encouragement. Now to send Pete all my half-baked, first day story plots filled with poor grammer and incorrect spelling!

    Comment by JamesAbel on July 30, 2013 @ 9:16 am

  12. And lots of detail concerning guns – he loves the detail concerning guns…..

    Comment by Justin Dunne on July 31, 2013 @ 2:06 am

  13. @James…

    *Lorne Green Death Pose*

    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 🙂

    Comment by Pete Bevan on July 31, 2013 @ 2:47 am

  14. I shooted the zombie with an angry grimace. My 4mith & Wesson .357 model 686 7 shot revovler with rubber grips and chrome finish that fired either .357 or .38 +P calibre rounds bucked in my hands as the rounds struck the zombie in the zombies head and it exploded with a hollow thude.

    Just for you, oh Great Editor!

    Comment by JamesAbel on July 31, 2013 @ 7:44 am

  15. Loved this story! I have found myself thinking about during the day between meetings, on the commute home and have re read and I just can’t get it out of my mind. The lasting image of the Z baby coming ever closer haunts me. I am torn between sympathy and ‘just desserts’ for the main character. Nice work.

    Comment by Craig on August 2, 2013 @ 1:44 am

  16. Thanks, Craig!

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 2, 2013 @ 11:15 am

  17. James, terrific story. Great writing. The twist at the end with the baby was perfect. But all that aside, what I liked is the evidence of Glen losing his mind. I think you portrayed this better than most big name writers, even without a ton of details. Though you state he’s going ape crap crazy, it was the little touches of sounds that played on his mind that made him losing his sanity feel real. I’ve always thought one of the hardest things to write was someone losing his/her mind. You made it look easy.

    Comment by A.J. Brown on August 3, 2013 @ 6:08 am

  18. I agree with A.J. Very well done.

    Comment by KevinF on August 3, 2013 @ 8:24 am

  19. Thanks so much A.J. and Kevin. That means a lot. A.J., I’ve been a fan of you’re “Dredging” story for awhile and I appreciate that you liked the story.

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 3, 2013 @ 7:57 pm

  20. James, over a year ago you posted this to one of my stories.

    “Anyway, yes, it was interesting enough to read twice. I’m trying to learn as mutch as I can from all the writers here. I just completed a rough draft today that I plan to submit once it is edited and polished. Will be my second submission (first was rejected – I only cried for a little bit). Hopefully I’ll do better this round. Long story short – keep ‘em coming..good stories!”

    Comment by JamesAbel on June 23, 2012 @ 5:36 pm

    All I have to say is you did not disappoint my friend, excellent work. The one thing that popped out to me, however so miniscule, was the description of the milk in the bottle after he fell. It is the small hints of detail like that that really bring the picture to life in the mind. Also, any parent has seen one of those when they find it under a bed or behind a curtain weeks after it was lost.

    Great Job James, very impressive.

    Comment by Richard Gustafson on August 8, 2013 @ 8:58 am

  21. Richard, the first thing that stands out about your comment is that I misspelled “much”. I can’t account for that as the “t” and “c” are not very close on the keyboard – But I very much know how to spell much. MUCH MUCH MUCH

    Second thing is – Thank you very much. I appreciate the comment. I honestly didn’t know what people would think of this story. I’ve written before, but just for myself. I’ve never had anything reviewed in a forum like this.

    Third thing: I’m glad I’m not the only parent who has that happen to them. Pesky kids.

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 8, 2013 @ 12:19 pm

  22. James, this is your first? IF so, then it was a well done first.

    Something you said struck me as interesting, and relatable. ‘I’ve written before, but just for myself.’

    Stephen King in his book, On Writing, states that the writer is also the first reader, he/she goes along for the journey to see where and how the story will unfold. I think this is one of the most crucial–if not, the most crucial–thing a writer can remember. As writers, if we don’t entertain ourselves with the stories we pen, then how are we to entertain others who we want to read our work?

    People say ‘know your audience.’ The audience, in essence, is you–the writer and reader. Keep writing for yourself. Keep entertaining yourself. Keep asking yourself, does this make sense? Would this be something a character would do in this situation? If you do, you will write more pieces like this one.

    Comment by A.J. Brown on August 8, 2013 @ 12:44 pm

  23. A.J. – I have On Writing an excellent book and inspiration. I’ll forever be grateful to King for writing it. This story was the first story that almost wrote itself for me. Which, as King describes, is how it is supposed to feel.

    I have to, like a lot of us here, thank Pete Bevan. I asked that he review my story and he gave excellent feedback. A few of my friends did the same for me. I also have to say that all the writers here provided excellent inspiration (also hours of relief from bordom while waiting on my wife to shop). You, KevinF, Pete, FF (Ladibug!), and everyone else are great. Would like to see a book with the great stories from here. I’d buy it!

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 8, 2013 @ 1:06 pm

  24. Stephen King has written a book on wiriting? I must get this book – all I’ve done to improve my writing is grow a beard and buy an oldy-timey smokers pipe. I even tried drinking brandy but that stuff is yucky! Oh and I take inspiration and lessons from the stories on here and the comments section too.

    If there was ever to be a book published with all the good stories from this site, it would be a VERY BIG book.

    Just be warned James – this writing thing is addictive – especially after you get a taste of…….feedback!

    Comment by Justin Dunne on August 8, 2013 @ 5:52 pm

  25. You are correct, Justin. I’ve worked more on my writing in the past week than I have in months. I hope I can be as consistent as most of you on here.

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 8, 2013 @ 6:54 pm

  26. We aren’t all consistent James, don’t let it fool you. My last submission was almost a year ago and I use the excuse that Sandy Hook really took me back from my wip but I think I just hit a wall. Even with AJ and Pete’s advice and guidance, I still have yet to punch a hole in the forth installment. I’m sure many can relate with me when I say it comes and goes. Some days it pours out of your finger tips like blood from an open wound. Other days, you wonder why you even try. The thing that I’ve come to learn (being a procrastinator such as I am) is that a story will grow when and how it will, no matter how much ink or time we throw at it. In some cases, it works best to step back and let it sit for a while before going back to it. Take Mr. King for instance. He will work a piece and hang it up to dry for a few months before going back to it. Doing this will give you a fresh mind and make it easier to see it from the perpective of the reader rather than the author. Of course, I just realized that you probably meant consistent as to the quality of the work that is presented on the site and not how often they are submitted. I degress, it has been a long week and I just want to curl up in a hole for a month.

    Comment by Richard Gustafson on August 9, 2013 @ 10:08 am

  27. You were correct in what I meant by consistent (how often stories are submitted). I don’t think anyone can keep pace with Craig Y, though. The quality issue kind of regulates itself, IMO, as the quality of writing on this site is quite good. I’ve read a lot (as most of us probably have) and I would have no problem recommending any work from any author on this site.

    I definitely relate to you in the coming and going of the work flow. It’s frustrating at best. Bad enough life gets in the way when things are flowing smoothly.

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 9, 2013 @ 12:02 pm

  28. Of course I’m correct James. I have a beard. Consistent. Hmmmmm. Not so much. This writing thing is HARD and time consuming.
    You say life gets in the way….. I assume you mean work and family and in my case, trying to find a minute to do nothing.
    It’s hard to be consistent. I don’t like to ‘work’ on my writing, I already have a full time job where I work. I like to ‘enjoy’ my writing. So if it feels like work, I stop.
    But in saying that, Richard Gustafson, hurry up with instalment 4 would ya.

    Comment by Justin Dunne on August 10, 2013 @ 9:01 am

  29. That’s it. I’m growing a beard so that,I too, can be correct.

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 10, 2013 @ 6:30 pm

  30. JamesBeard the Pirate. Aarr.

    Comment by Richard Gustafson on August 13, 2013 @ 8:47 am

  31. Walk the plank ye lilly-livered jelly guts!

    Comment by JamesAbel on August 14, 2013 @ 1:46 pm

  32. To my long lost brother. You have always had a way with words. Your writing about Zombies does not surprise me in the least. Your imagination is unstoppable. You did a great job with detail and kept me interested when I normally would not read about zombies. Good luck with the next. Glad you are putting that mind of yours to good use!!

    Comment by Joy Abbey on December 9, 2013 @ 10:20 pm

  33. Awesome story!

    Comment by katrinalyn76 on December 26, 2013 @ 11:39 am

  34. Thanks, Katrinalyn. Appreciate you reading it.

    Comment by JamesAbel on December 28, 2013 @ 9:21 pm

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